For a Lousy Drink?
Vampire 5-7-5 contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You've captured the expression on her face beautifully! And, yes, he really thought he had the perfect chat-up line. But she had the final retort. Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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You've captured the expression on her face beautifully! And, yes, he really thought he had the perfect chat-up line. But she had the final retort. Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Debbie. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yeah, they're always promising something, aren't they?? :-) A good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Yeah, they're always promising something, aren't they?? :-) A good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Well hey, Yvette. How long have you been back? That's awesome.
Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Glad to see you're back.
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Just back recently... new place, new life... still the same ol' me! So good to connect again -- good to hear from you!! ;) Yvette
Comment from jessizero
This vampire 5-7-5 was definitely a creative take on the prompt. I loved the response to the vampire's offer! You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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This vampire 5-7-5 was definitely a creative take on the prompt. I loved the response to the vampire's offer! You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Some chicks in bars can just be freakin ingrates, can't they?! What gives with that?
I love this entry, and I'm betting LOTS of members will. I fully expect to see this one in the Winner's Circle, Mystery Poet! Good luck to you. xoxo
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Some chicks in bars can just be freakin ingrates, can't they?! What gives with that?
I love this entry, and I'm betting LOTS of members will. I fully expect to see this one in the Winner's Circle, Mystery Poet! Good luck to you. xoxo
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Lol. I was just in one of those moods again. Who could pass up a vampire 5-7-5 when a couple shots in after work? Haha. Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Rachelle. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
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No one in his WRITE mind could!! Haaa! I bet you just love what I did there!! xoxox
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Hahaha. Yes I did.
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