Marco Polo
I follow his path onward3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of following your vision of the master even while others may scoff and more are truly an inspirational starting point -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
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A beautiful free verse for the contest here -- your words of following your vision of the master even while others may scoff and more are truly an inspirational starting point -- thank you so much for sharing and best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Sep-2024
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Well done. Feel there should be a break between is life and your parents but understand why.
To what are you referring with - 600 strong only 8 survived
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Well done. Feel there should be a break between is life and your parents but understand why.
To what are you referring with - 600 strong only 8 survived
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Rachelle Allen
What a unique topic you have chosen for this Free Verse Poem contest, and what a perfect job you did drawing parallels between his world and yours. You're right; all these centuries later, all these basics remain the same - who matters in your life the most and that, eventually, no matter how large the original pack, everyone dies. Good luck to you in the polls. xo
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What a unique topic you have chosen for this Free Verse Poem contest, and what a perfect job you did drawing parallels between his world and yours. You're right; all these centuries later, all these basics remain the same - who matters in your life the most and that, eventually, no matter how large the original pack, everyone dies. Good luck to you in the polls. xo
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024