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No Shadow Cast

5-7-5 contest

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This horror 5-7-5, No Shadow Cast, has the proper formatting and captures the moment when the demon strikes and leaves his victim in the state of living death.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2024


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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A stunningly powerful post! I like the visual and your vividly illustrated verse complements it well. I particularly enjoyed the play on the last line. Well done and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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Comment from jaded831
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Your poem captured the feel of a vampire. In my mind I visualized a vampire turning into a bat and flying away towards a full moon. The picture compliments your poem well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Pretty gory there... but it is a vampire competition! :) A good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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Comment from jessizero
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This was a creepy poem for the "vampire 5-7-5" writing prompt. You also got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing this poem, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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Comment from Begin Again
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Tis the season for those bloody-thirsty creatures to be lurking about. I wonder how many necks he had to bite to satisfy his hunger. Was it a feast or just a late-night snack?
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh my goodness, this is a blood thirsty post and of course appropriate for the contest, I wish you luck, a fine presentation, sending a chill down my spine, love Dolly x x x x x x

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2024


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