Forest Scent
Haiku 5-7-5 (after gentle rains)4 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Absolutely love the appeal to that much neglected sense of smell here! :-) Thanx so much for sharing today and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Absolutely love the appeal to that much neglected sense of smell here! :-) Thanx so much for sharing today and best of luck to you in the competition! ;)
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thanks Yvette!
My ranking was only 4th so I earned zero FS monies for my effort. I thought it was good, but apparently the other voters did not like the smell (-(
Mark
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
It's a particular scent and I love it.
In Summer it's not as strong but the rain enhances it.
During my walks in my pine forest, I found many years go, an area where super mini conifers grow.
I collect them each year and spray them with golden paint..they are very decorative.
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have two votes.
It's a particular scent and I love it.
In Summer it's not as strong but the rain enhances it.
During my walks in my pine forest, I found many years go, an area where super mini conifers grow.
I collect them each year and spray them with golden paint..they are very decorative.
Comment Written 03-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
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Thanks for your voting support!
Mark
Comment from jessizero
The descriptions in this poem were great. You also got the syllable counts right for the writing prompt. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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The descriptions in this poem were great. You also got the syllable counts right for the writing prompt. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 29-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2024
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Thanks Jessi.
Pleased you liked my overall presentation for this 5/7/5 contest.
Comment from Begin Again
Caress wouldn't be the exact word I would use...but allergies play a big part and sneezing. I do love the scent of the pines but they don't like me. LOl
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Caress wouldn't be the exact word I would use...but allergies play a big part and sneezing. I do love the scent of the pines but they don't like me. LOl
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 28-Sep-2024
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Carol,
I sympathize with your allergies. Dust or animal dander is now my biggest bugaboo. I no longer get those sneezing fits since I have someone cutting my lawn. The pines have a delicious scent even if it has not rained.
Smiles back to you for your compliment.
