Comment from
Y. M. Roger
Pretty sure the pain was not worth the pleasure... or vice-versa.. :) A good entry for the 5-7-5 vampiric contest here -- thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :-)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
Thank you much for your review!
Comment from
jessizero
I don't know if I should say "Eek!" or "Well Done!" Either way, this poem was interesting and got the syllable counts right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2024
Thank you much for your review!