Comment from
Sallyo
Ha! I've been called Jenny which is not my name and my husband was given his brother's x-ray by mistake... in these days of computerisation things seem to be getting worse. Your story illuminated reality perfectly.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
Many thanks for your review. Oh, the traumas of being called by another name! I used to get called 'Carol' by an older lady until one or other parent dealt with it
Comment from
Robert Zimmerman
I enjoyed the story. The writing meets the criteria for dialogue only. It gets a little phrenetic during the middle of the story which made me laugh. I'm not sure I followed the conversation, but I enjoyed it.
ZIM
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
I had to remind myself that this was not a real story or a script. Thank you for your review
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 24-Sep-2024