My heavy heart
all-consuming process2 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
I gave up fighting grief. It's always there, but I finally learned to live with it and still smile. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I gave up fighting grief. It's always there, but I finally learned to live with it and still smile. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks for the read and review! I'd love to be able to prove you wrong about the fight with grief, but I can't. Glad the poem/meaning was understood. Thanks again!
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Yes, how guilt can come on board and sink ANY ship, let alone one already weighted down with gief. Woulda/shoulda/coulda comes on in full force then. It takes all one's stamina to remain afloat.
Very well done haiku.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Yes, how guilt can come on board and sink ANY ship, let alone one already weighted down with gief. Woulda/shoulda/coulda comes on in full force then. It takes all one's stamina to remain afloat.
Very well done haiku.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thanks for your thoughts. You definitely got the message/meaning of my work. Take care!