Turn Right at the Moon
Let's take a trip to the future.2 total reviews
Comment from estory
What I found interesting about this piece was that it illustrated how technology might seem like it is creating a whole new world, we really don't change much through it all. We still need adventure, we still need snack food and ben gay, we are all still, in some ways, desperados on the run. We are ruled by selfishness sometimes, compassion at other times; our old emotions still rule the day. I thought you put plenty of personality in the writing, and that livened it up. Lots of color and texture to the details in this piece. estory
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What I found interesting about this piece was that it illustrated how technology might seem like it is creating a whole new world, we really don't change much through it all. We still need adventure, we still need snack food and ben gay, we are all still, in some ways, desperados on the run. We are ruled by selfishness sometimes, compassion at other times; our old emotions still rule the day. I thought you put plenty of personality in the writing, and that livened it up. Lots of color and texture to the details in this piece. estory
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
Comment from Mia Twysted
The piece started really slow, but I understand the setting had to be set. I was just about to walk away from the piece when we got to the car pulling in. I like Chase. It doesn't matter how far into the future we seem to get we still have issues with the human race.
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The piece started really slow, but I understand the setting had to be set. I was just about to walk away from the piece when we got to the car pulling in. I like Chase. It doesn't matter how far into the future we seem to get we still have issues with the human race.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024