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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Pumpkins and turkeys do get the bad end of the deal for their holiday, or special day. But not Christmas. I enjoyed reading this cute poem. This poem is very creative. I never would have thought about the holidays this way. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
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Thos was one of those things that make you laugh but then immediately feel guilty for. I love the cleverness to this. Also the dark humor of the irony. Gretchen

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Gretchen

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Well that covers the season very neatly! Poor old turkeys not much fun for them...or the pumpkins! Lovely injection of humour though in your delightful haiku. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Debbie

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Gypsy,
I like your lighthearted, humorous take on the upcoming holidays!
I'm glad the President gets to pardon one or two of them before the holidays. lol.
Great smile, Gypsy,
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much,
    Cindy

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from Teri7
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Gypsy, This is a really well written Modern Haiku you have penned about the turkeys and pumpkins. I had just told my husband tonight I really wish we had a pumpkin pie. He makes really good ones. Thank you for sharing my friend. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Teri

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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One might easily concur that they are indeed empty headed in light of being ignorant to the fact that they are the meal. Reminds me of us humans who see ignorance as always being bliss, untilbwe get eaten up.
RJ

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 24-Sep-2024
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from shelley kaye
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heh good one
liked the "unfortunate turkeys and pumpkins" image
and the making plans is a great satori twist

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Shelley

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
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This is brilliant Gypsy, it really says they aren't very bright, as your great poem says, very witty indeed, Gypsy, there are some limericks coming out, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much,
    Roy

    Gypsy 😊
reply by royowen on 24-Sep-2024
    Welcome
reply by royowen on 24-Sep-2024
    Pleasure
Comment from lyenochka
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You're really getting us ready for the autumnal holidays with pumpkins and turkeys. Poor turkeys - they get such a bad rap. I hope they aren't as empty-headed as they say they are!

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Hahaha... yes, poor turkeys, at least pumpkins don't feel anything... as far as I know. You are so kind, you even feel bad for turkeys.

    Thank you very much, Big Sister. I hope you had a good weekend and didn't work too hard. Mine was nice and mellow. Yesterday I was alone most of the day and I wrote assignments for 3 clubs! That was too much, I usually split 2 clubs one day and 1 the other.

    I have to spend more time exercising and less writing. I get so lost in my writing.

    love,

    marival

reply by lyenochka on 22-Sep-2024
    Wow, you manage three clubs! I keep forgetting to do the challenges. Twice a month was my goal.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
    Yes, and if I don't post because I'm busy, members will contact me to see what happened. LoL