2024 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this pumpkin patch poem with us. I have no clue why, but this poem reminded me of a book I used to read to my first graders, "Spookley the Square Pumpkin." It's a fun story. I enjoyed your entire presentation.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this pumpkin patch poem with us. I have no clue why, but this poem reminded me of a book I used to read to my first graders, "Spookley the Square Pumpkin." It's a fun story. I enjoyed your entire presentation.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mark D. R.
Gypsy,
A good one for the early days of Autumn! Although the artwork is a bit Halloween-like eerie, the message and presentation are clear.
Of course, carved pumpkins in some cultures ward off evil spirits (-; The pumpkins in the field are faceless.
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
A good one for the early days of Autumn! Although the artwork is a bit Halloween-like eerie, the message and presentation are clear.
Of course, carved pumpkins in some cultures ward off evil spirits (-; The pumpkins in the field are faceless.
Mark
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, mark
Gypsy 😊
Comment from GWHARGIS
Well, this felt like fall. The crisp description and it dusts off the residue of summertime. This was a very festive feeling poem. A big welcome to the upcoming season. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Well, this felt like fall. The crisp description and it dusts off the residue of summertime. This was a very festive feeling poem. A big welcome to the upcoming season. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
I like the abstract words of your Autumn poem.
Faceless pumpkins, soon to be carved into jack o lanterns.
It's chilly here tonight, Autumn's first night. As I read this,
I look forward to all the wonders of the season.
I love your hauntingly-beautiful photo.
Best wishes, Gypsy.
Have a great week and Autumn too.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
I like the abstract words of your Autumn poem.
Faceless pumpkins, soon to be carved into jack o lanterns.
It's chilly here tonight, Autumn's first night. As I read this,
I look forward to all the wonders of the season.
I love your hauntingly-beautiful photo.
Best wishes, Gypsy.
Have a great week and Autumn too.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, you are such a pro at these. You used great descriptive words and great imagery as always. I can't believe today is the first day of Autumn. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Gypsy, you are such a pro at these. You used great descriptive words and great imagery as always. I can't believe today is the first day of Autumn. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Teri
Gypsy 😊
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You are so welcome! 😊💕❤️
Comment from shelley kaye
oooh love that second pic! totally cool!
i love the image of the wind dusting pumpkins - feels cleansing
a great haiku for autumn -
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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oooh love that second pic! totally cool!
i love the image of the wind dusting pumpkins - feels cleansing
a great haiku for autumn -
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A delightful autumn/pumpkin special haiku. Love the image of your satori, faceless pumpkins, and the middle line so cleverly unites the verse with an evocative dusting off of the fruits* of autumn.
Having put 'fruits' I thought I'd better check and they are in fact classified as fruits, not vegetables.
Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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A delightful autumn/pumpkin special haiku. Love the image of your satori, faceless pumpkins, and the middle line so cleverly unites the verse with an evocative dusting off of the fruits* of autumn.
Having put 'fruits' I thought I'd better check and they are in fact classified as fruits, not vegetables.
Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie. I don't understand the reference to fruit.
Gypsy 😊
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I just put fruits of autumn and the wondered then if pumpkins were fruits or vegetables. And they are in fact classed as fruits.
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------and it's hard to believe it's already autumn, with the most consequental election of our lifetime looming later in the fall
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------and it's hard to believe it's already autumn, with the most consequental election of our lifetime looming later in the fall
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Mike. 43 days! baby. I know in my heart, Kamala is going to win. That will be the best Christmas present ever.
Gypsy 😊
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I like what your heart is telling you, Gypsy
Comment from BethShelby
Fall is a colorful time of the year and I'm already seeing pumpkins although nothing has changed here yet. I like you Haiku's You definitely capture the essence of the season and your work is beautifully illustrated.
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Fall is a colorful time of the year and I'm already seeing pumpkins although nothing has changed here yet. I like you Haiku's You definitely capture the essence of the season and your work is beautifully illustrated.
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Beth.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
I like it! Those "faceless pumpkins" do need some dusting off. But probably the wind added more dirt and leaves in the process. But the bottom picture shows that the pumpkins got some scary faces!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I like it! Those "faceless pumpkins" do need some dusting off. But probably the wind added more dirt and leaves in the process. But the bottom picture shows that the pumpkins got some scary faces!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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yes, I love spooky poems and stuff lol sorry
Thank you very much, Big Sister
MariVal 😊❤️