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Willing Hearts

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Solve a crime and fall in love at the same time?

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Comment from Ric Myworld
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At a point where the bonds are quickly getting thicker, I'm guessing that something big is about to happen. But with me, I'm just the type who is always anticipating something. LOL. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter.

"That would be (a) problem, wouldn't it?"

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the catch. I've made the correction. Yes, something big is about to happen. I appreciate the kind review.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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(Your) English is excellent.

Sami is showing her strong character and I like this. She's been locked up for too long and she's bound to be frustrated by all the machismo going on. Great ending. Thanks for sharing, Barbara. Take care Debbie

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Begin Again
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Terrific exchange between Sami and Noah...
And if the picture indicates what he looks like, Garth might have a run for the money. LOL
I enjoyed this chapter, as always. I especially liked Sami letting her friend know where things stand. It was a good one for her!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.
Comment from patcelaw
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This chapter is very well constructed. It was a pleasure to listen to. It moves along very well because your sentence structure your paragraph and your punctuation are so very well done. I wish you the very best with writing your book. Patricia.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
    Thank you for the kind review and the encouragement.