Rhythmic
Sound waves vs natural sounds2 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and good presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-I like the first line with "dance."
-Good closing lines that include "sound."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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-Nice artwork and good presentation.
-You wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-I like the first line with "dance."
-Good closing lines that include "sound."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this little poem. You made me feel good in 6 words. I can picture myself dancing on a beach. It would have to be a romantic dance. That is what comes to mind.
Good luck in the contest. I'd use beach artwork to help my chances of winning.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I like this little poem. You made me feel good in 6 words. I can picture myself dancing on a beach. It would have to be a romantic dance. That is what comes to mind.
Good luck in the contest. I'd use beach artwork to help my chances of winning.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review. I was hoping the reader will get the double meaning, ocean waves and sound waves.