Sandra's Lover
Viewing comments for Chapter 45 "Cory Webster and the Video"A macabre crime thriller. Grotesque and detailed.
2 total reviews
Comment from lancellot
Another well-made chapter and I get to see and learn more about Terry's folks. Tags is something to look into.
notes:
therapy is so expensive." Terry's mother Linda said
- therapy is so expensive," Terry's mother Linda said
"It's ok mom, how much do you need?" Said Terry already
-"It's ok mom, how much do you need?" said Terry already
Terry knew her {mothers'} shortcomings and
-mother's
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Another well-made chapter and I get to see and learn more about Terry's folks. Tags is something to look into.
notes:
therapy is so expensive." Terry's mother Linda said
- therapy is so expensive," Terry's mother Linda said
"It's ok mom, how much do you need?" Said Terry already
-"It's ok mom, how much do you need?" said Terry already
Terry knew her {mothers'} shortcomings and
-mother's
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much for your review! I will make the suggested changes!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This was such an enjoayble read. I loved the way you bring in small details, like Terry's real name being Tangerine! The tension building with the investigation was well done. Especially when Terry recognizes the car - that was really well done and made me eager to find out what happens next. Great work keeping the suspense alive!
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This was such an enjoayble read. I loved the way you bring in small details, like Terry's real name being Tangerine! The tension building with the investigation was well done. Especially when Terry recognizes the car - that was really well done and made me eager to find out what happens next. Great work keeping the suspense alive!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your review I really appreciate it!