Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao mystery writer, you now have three votes!

I'm a sci fi nerd and I have no doubt that the government has been hiding/ withholding info on ET beings.


And to keep the cat in the bag , it will intimidate and ever kill anyone that tries to inform the people.

 Comment Written 22-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024

Grazie tanto, Signorina.

Comment from F. William Lester

Excellent

An interesting twist on our alien visitors. The contrast between morals and duty was stark. Nice work. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Be well.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024

Thank you.

reply by F. William Lester on 22-Sep-2024

You're welcome.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Well, this is barebones. But you only had one hundred words. Things do move fast, but the reader does get a pretty good picture of what is going on and an idea of why Gomez had to be killed.

Nice entry.

 Comment Written 21-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024

Thanks.

Comment from giraffmang

Good

Hi there,

Might want to recheck the wordage. i make this 98 and the requirements state 100 exactly.

Deputy Gomez saw it clearly - missing end punctuation here.

I like it though.
GMG

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024

Cheers.