Gently swaying reeds
Haiku30 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
This was an excellent response to the club challenge. The imagery of reeds swaying gently in the breeze is so soothing and dreamy. But the sound of divine music adds another dimension - that of sound. Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This was an excellent response to the club challenge. The imagery of reeds swaying gently in the breeze is so soothing and dreamy. But the sound of divine music adds another dimension - that of sound. Well done!
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed reading your.poem. I like the way you worded the poem, especially the melodies of divine music. The picture is a good choice for your words.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed reading your.poem. I like the way you worded the poem, especially the melodies of divine music. The picture is a good choice for your words.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much,appreciate your comments.
Comment from LanceHill
This is a great entry for the contest. You have expressed the picture through words in a beautiful manner. It proves that a lot can be said with few words. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed weekend.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This is a great entry for the contest. You have expressed the picture through words in a beautiful manner. It proves that a lot can be said with few words. Thank you for sharing. Have a blessed weekend.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by and reading and reviewing.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
You have created an artistic and almost melodic image with your words. I love Haiku that makes you feel the words you are reading. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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You have created an artistic and almost melodic image with your words. I love Haiku that makes you feel the words you are reading. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for these encouraging comments.
Comment from LJbutterfly
If the music made by reeds is as beautiful as the picture, then paradise could be experienced as the reeds gently swayed. I love the imagery provided by this Haiku presentation. The colors are stunning.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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If the music made by reeds is as beautiful as the picture, then paradise could be experienced as the reeds gently swayed. I love the imagery provided by this Haiku presentation. The colors are stunning.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by and reading my little poem .Much appreciated.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
If you hadn't posted the note about reeds making ideal flutes, I probably would have struggled with this Haiku more. Knowing that, I surely appreciate your poem and the beautiful image.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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If you hadn't posted the note about reeds making ideal flutes, I probably would have struggled with this Haiku more. Knowing that, I surely appreciate your poem and the beautiful image.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I didnt in the beginning and after the first two reviews i suspected many people may not get it So I added that .Thank you very much for stopping by.
Comment from Shanbreen
Love this haiku, and the "melodies of divine music" brings to mind songs honoring spirituality. Also, the metaphor of using reeds, because they make good flutes, is very clever.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Love this haiku, and the "melodies of divine music" brings to mind songs honoring spirituality. Also, the metaphor of using reeds, because they make good flutes, is very clever.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for stopping by to read my haiku
Comment from nancyjam
I enjoyed your lovely Haiku. It gives the reader a peaceful feeling, with its' descriptive lines and the lovely artwork. Nature is often a source of beautiful, peaceful music.
Nancy
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed your lovely Haiku. It gives the reader a peaceful feeling, with its' descriptive lines and the lovely artwork. Nature is often a source of beautiful, peaceful music.
Nancy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for your encouraging comments
Comment from Nicki.B
I really love this haiku bring nature to life with reference to music, very well put together. I enjoyed this a lot. The imagery is perfect completion for the poem.
Well done!
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I really love this haiku bring nature to life with reference to music, very well put together. I enjoyed this a lot. The imagery is perfect completion for the poem.
Well done!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I like your imagery of the reeds preserving sacred music. Nature does offer us divine music, unchanging throughout the ages, if we would only listen. This is a lovely Haiku, and a lovely thought to reflect upon.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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I like your imagery of the reeds preserving sacred music. Nature does offer us divine music, unchanging throughout the ages, if we would only listen. This is a lovely Haiku, and a lovely thought to reflect upon.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much.