Desperate Measures
The abomination that is domestic violence.3 total reviews
Comment from F. William Lester
Wow. Fifty words that hurt. A sad commentary about the increase in domestic violence today. I wouldn't want to be in her place. I hope he passed out before he could hurt her, and she slipped away. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Be well.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Wow. Fifty words that hurt. A sad commentary about the increase in domestic violence today. I wouldn't want to be in her place. I hope he passed out before he could hurt her, and she slipped away. Thanks for sharing it and good luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Be well.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you.
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Begin Again
Domestic abuse is something that is difficult for some to break away from and the damage it causes to everyone involved is beyond repair. As you showed in your flash, if an attempt fails, the abuse will be worse.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Domestic abuse is something that is difficult for some to break away from and the damage it causes to everyone involved is beyond repair. As you showed in your flash, if an attempt fails, the abuse will be worse.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Carol.
Comment from SimianSavant
Well done; you packed a punch in 50 words and ended on a more harrowing note than when you started. This looks like a strong contest contender.
The image, I didn't get at first. It looked like badly applied make-up, until I zoomed in. Now I get it.
For presentation, if you set the image size to "small" under the advanced editing options at the bottom, it will prevent the text from aligning to the right of the image at the beginning.
Thanks for the read,
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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Well done; you packed a punch in 50 words and ended on a more harrowing note than when you started. This looks like a strong contest contender.
The image, I didn't get at first. It looked like badly applied make-up, until I zoomed in. Now I get it.
For presentation, if you set the image size to "small" under the advanced editing options at the bottom, it will prevent the text from aligning to the right of the image at the beginning.
Thanks for the read,
🦍
Comment Written 19-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Great review. Thanks.