Fifty Word Flash!
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Comment from Douglas Goff
Alright, I had to six star the boy and Max his dog. This story was just too cute bit to smile at.
You are a rare and enjoyable talent, my friend!
Douglas
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Alright, I had to six star the boy and Max his dog. This story was just too cute bit to smile at.
You are a rare and enjoyable talent, my friend!
Douglas
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Wow! How kind of you to comment on my stories and the author in such wonderful, and humbling ways. I am beyond thrilled. He was a very special boy and so was Patches.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah I love this. What a sweet story. Just a little boy and his best friend doggo playing cops and robbers. Well done thanks for sharing this cute enjoyable story.
Best wishes
Nicki
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Ah I love this. What a sweet story. Just a little boy and his best friend doggo playing cops and robbers. Well done thanks for sharing this cute enjoyable story.
Best wishes
Nicki
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much... he left me with penty of memories and I will be forever grateful. I am glad you enjoyed his antics.
Smiles, Carol
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Awe Carol, cherished memories. Hugs xxx
Comment from jmdg1954
A boy and his dog! This combination will always have the makings to a good story. Yours was no different.
I liked the thought process as every young boy wants to he a policeman, astronaut or cowboy ( huh, did I say cowboy?).
Nicely written and I see it's already an All Time Best!
Cheers,
John
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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A boy and his dog! This combination will always have the makings to a good story. Yours was no different.
I liked the thought process as every young boy wants to he a policeman, astronaut or cowboy ( huh, did I say cowboy?).
Nicely written and I see it's already an All Time Best!
Cheers,
John
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thanks, John.... Mikey had a lot of living to do in four years, but being a sheriff was his favorite. His daddy wasn't too happy when he found him dancing around the front yard in his sister's pink tutu one day. Maybe that's another one to share.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent flash fiction. I was surprised when it was a shoe that dropped in the end. We must watch for those youngsters and their playing sheriff.
I enjoyed this very much, Carol. Thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Excellent flash fiction. I was surprised when it was a shoe that dropped in the end. We must watch for those youngsters and their playing sheriff.
I enjoyed this very much, Carol. Thank you for sharing. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Gloria.
I only ha Mikey for four short years but he gave me a lot of memories to get through life without him. I appreciate your kindness, the comments and the stars.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Liz O'Neill
He has an affinity for shoes. "Stifling a grin, the boy growled, "You're under arrest." ad the hero is applauded: But added, "Good dog." nice to see the proper hero getting recognition.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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He has an affinity for shoes. "Stifling a grin, the boy growled, "You're under arrest." ad the hero is applauded: But added, "Good dog." nice to see the proper hero getting recognition.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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They were inseparable... and came away as a loving duo no matter what the crime, LOL Thank you for enjoying this one, Liz.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ginda Simpson
This is a darling flash. You have captured the young boy's imaginary crime scene, before revealing who the culprit was. The last line is precious.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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This is a darling flash. You have captured the young boy's imaginary crime scene, before revealing who the culprit was. The last line is precious.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2024
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The two were inseparable and I am thankful for the memories. I appreciate your kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Writeup Master
Hilarious and cute.
Makes you wonder where the action is taking place and who the culprit is!
I can almost imagine a whole series on these two characters... "The sheriff and his Dog".
An amazing write up nonetheless. Great job Carol.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Hilarious and cute.
Makes you wonder where the action is taking place and who the culprit is!
I can almost imagine a whole series on these two characters... "The sheriff and his Dog".
An amazing write up nonetheless. Great job Carol.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thanks...I base the story on my little boy who passed when he was four. He was quite the mischievous one. Always shooting the neighbor and arresting him when he came home from work. Thank you for checking my story out. There are a few more in my portfolio and of course my novel...but its tough to jump into something like that.
Smiles, Carol
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Lol... Give me time, I'll be sure to go through some of your work. I'm basically 4 days old on Fanstory... Still navigating my way around.
Bless his soul.
Cheers, have a lovely weekend.
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That's fine...but I know that you need the $$ to post your work and some of mine still have good amounts on them. but whenever you can...until then I wish you well with your writing.
miles, Carol
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Thanks for looking out for me, I'll definitely take my time to dive in.
Smiles, David
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Great, David! I always like to put a name to my replies...though I am old and might forget..just give me a nudge. LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Dawn Munro
AaaHAHAHAHA!!! What a way to brighten my day! This is adorable -- I am thoroughly charmed (and caught off guard with that surprise ending).
Why is this not a contest entry!!!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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AaaHAHAHAHA!!! What a way to brighten my day! This is adorable -- I am thoroughly charmed (and caught off guard with that surprise ending).
Why is this not a contest entry!!!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I have won a contest during the last 30 days so I cen't enter another one...no problem. I just get more reviews when I post them outside of contests anyhow.
Smiles, Carol
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:) Well, I certainly enjoyed it!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Why aren't you eligible, Carol? Have you been winning too many contests? this is a great flash which I enjoyed, not least because no violence was involved in its creation:)) Delightful image too to accompany it. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Why aren't you eligible, Carol? Have you been winning too many contests? this is a great flash which I enjoyed, not least because no violence was involved in its creation:)) Delightful image too to accompany it. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I won one...but it's been within the last 30 days so I am not eligible. It's okay...I had fun writing it and I posted it so my friends could read it. The other way is blind and I usually don't get many followers that way. Thank you so much!
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very amusing fifty words. The dog was never worried (his tail was wagging), even if his boy really needed his shoe back. The kid was surprised how easily his thief of a dog followed his command.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Very amusing fifty words. The dog was never worried (his tail was wagging), even if his boy really needed his shoe back. The kid was surprised how easily his thief of a dog followed his command.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Yes, the sheriff was surprised when his pup listened and dropped the shoe...maybe a bit sloppier than before...but nothing was hurt in the making of the story. LOL
Smiles, Carol