Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

After you having posted 41 chapters, I'm amazed that I haven't come across your story long before. And maybe I have and just don't remember it. But I enjoyed reading it and just wish I'd not come so late to the game.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!

 Comment Written 20-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024

Thank you so much for your review - I will be posting more in my book. Please follow and read more!

reply by Ric Myworld on 20-Sep-2024

I will certainly drop in from time to time. I do wish I'd been around from the beginning; but unfortunately, with time restraints, I won't have time to go back and catch up what I've missed. Wishing you the best!

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

some times keeping lists and notes so that you can have power over people is a good way to lose friends and respect, but if being number one is all that counts...it might work.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

Thank you for your feedback!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

That is one demanding woman holding things over people's heads to get what she wants. Please check your paragraph breaks in the last six paragraphs. What a wonderfully written story. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

Thank you Mike! I appreciate your feedback!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This was daylight for 2002 and I very much appreciate the fact that you bring a great deal of it detail into the lives of your character characters. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you a wonderful day. Patricia.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024

Thank you Patricia!