Comment from
Maria Millsaps
I was wondering if this is a 12-line Rondeau Prime poem. I like the message. The poem adheres to a specific rhyme and meter and follows a natural cadence. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
Don't really know, except I used to write song lyrics. No formal training in any way, just write it how I'm happy with it, thanks, Maria
Comment from
jessizero
This poem was chilling in its predictions. That's good, though, as it means you got a strong reaction from the reader. I liked your rhymes, too. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
Thank you, Jessi, and wishing the same for you