Memories of Summer
The sun was warm on those long ago walks.3 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Beautiful youthful words and imagery... Perhaps choose a formatting that does not 'suggest' rhymed stanzas to the reader's eyes/mind... the mixing of personification and true human interaction is well done. Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Beautiful youthful words and imagery... Perhaps choose a formatting that does not 'suggest' rhymed stanzas to the reader's eyes/mind... the mixing of personification and true human interaction is well done. Thanx for sharing and best of luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I will try to restructure thanks for the input.
Comment from Begin Again
The warmth and beauty of a lazy, hazy summer day when love springs forth, full of promise, and we pray that it won't drift away in the autumn breezes. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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The warmth and beauty of a lazy, hazy summer day when love springs forth, full of promise, and we pray that it won't drift away in the autumn breezes. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from papa55mike
Yes, we are in summer's last gasp and waiting for the amazing autumn to begin. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Yes, we are in summer's last gasp and waiting for the amazing autumn to begin. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the read and the comments.
