Comment from
jessizero
This was graphic without having to employ the aid of a picture. Your poem was very effective. You also got the syllable count right. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
Comment from
Begin Again
How heartbreaking! I know they say it's just nature doing what nature does, and in the wild, that's how the cycle goes, but it's still a tough pill to swallow.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 18-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
It is so unfair, born only to die minutes later.
The death rate is very high 1/2 the births within a year die.
Being free has its downs.