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Monsters Inside

We are the problem

2 total reviews 
Comment from Amelie Johns
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This is a profound poem that speaks raw truth about the state of today's world and society. I particularly like the line 'now we watch the world unable to see'. This poem certainly paints the picture in full-resolution. We certainly are the problem, that is for sure. Thank you for sharing.
Best wishes,
Amelie

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Amelie
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This poem hits hard with its commentary on the state of the world. I love the line "black hole where our reasoning used to be". Perfect! You share raw raw truth in yoru writing. Well done for tackling such thoughts with such force!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you, Michael