Comment from
Begin Again
It makes me think of the scales of justice and how we strive to keep an evil kell, knowing that it teeters and tips, bringing us closer to disaster. This is a powerful poem.
Though it is difficult for these eyes to read the red o yellow....
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
I'll change the font colour! Thank you!!
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
This poem really stood out. I thought your final lines seem to look at destiny - and I felt this in your entire poem. This poem carries a deep energy that will linger long after I read it. Fantastic work!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024