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Reliance

But temporary moments

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Comment from Begin Again
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It makes me think of the scales of justice and how we strive to keep an evil kell, knowing that it teeters and tips, bringing us closer to disaster. This is a powerful poem.

Though it is difficult for these eyes to read the red o yellow....
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
    I'll change the font colour! Thank you!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This poem really stood out. I thought your final lines seem to look at destiny - and I felt this in your entire poem. This poem carries a deep energy that will linger long after I read it. Fantastic work!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
    Thank you 😊