In The Garden
Opening Line contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
We all worry that one day we might be like Eleanor and lose our train of thought or worse. And it's difficult for someone to watch 24/7. Hope the man with the shotgun realizes that.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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We all worry that one day we might be like Eleanor and lose our train of thought or worse. And it's difficult for someone to watch 24/7. Hope the man with the shotgun realizes that.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Carol. Yes, I'm pretty sure he'll realize it. Lol. Have yourself a great day.
Comment from Julie G1
Well written. This tale conveys a great response to the prompt. It is poignant, and contains an evocative word picture, quite effective. Overall, worked well for this reader.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Well written. This tale conveys a great response to the prompt. It is poignant, and contains an evocative word picture, quite effective. Overall, worked well for this reader.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the great review and stars, Julie.
