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The Swallow And The Frog

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao mystery poet,

I enjoyed your poem and I like the wordplay in regards to "swallow " but I have to say the artwork and the frog without legs had me laughing tears.

The French love frog legs and snails too.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2024

Comment from jessizero
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This was a humorous poem with very funny wordplay. I think you nailed the writing prompt! The picture you chose to accompany the piece was funny, too.
Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

Comment from Lindsey Russell
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This is a cute poem! You made the story of the sparrow and the frog flow seamlessly even though the animals don't have much in common. Happy writing!!

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024