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The day I met Jesus
2 total reviews
Comment from
Begin Again
It is an incredible story of a dream most any of us would like to have or, better yet, a reality. But as for the contest, I believe it says the opening line should be a hook and then a paragraph, not a whole story. I may be wrong. Regardless, I enjoyed your post.
smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
Thank you, Carol. I appreciate your constructive comment. I had the same concern. To remedy this problem, I added a couple of lines. Hope it works! Thanks, again for your review.
Comment from
Lindsey Russell
This would be an amazing beginning to what I'm sure would be an absolutely beautiful story. You did an awesome job! You deserve the stars! Happy writing!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
Thank you, Lindsey! I am truly grateful for such an encouraging review. I especially appreciate the sixth star. Thank you.
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