Imagination
a 5-7-56 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
It's like when a woman says NO and the man doesn't stop and after he says : when women says no they really mean go ahead despite she was struggling and he has a big scratch on his face.
Some people have a distorted view of reality aka imagination overpowers reality.
Hope I made sense.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.
It's like when a woman says NO and the man doesn't stop and after he says : when women says no they really mean go ahead despite she was struggling and he has a big scratch on his face.
Some people have a distorted view of reality aka imagination overpowers reality.
Hope I made sense.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Yes. Thank you, T
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow. This powerful - and with so few words. You share the difference between reality and the imagination. Adding the gun adds quite the sinister side to this. I wasn't expecting that.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Wow. This powerful - and with so few words. You share the difference between reality and the imagination. Adding the gun adds quite the sinister side to this. I wasn't expecting that.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Neither was the speaker.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
Wow, this one is quite memorable! I am picturing some Taratino scene where the assailant reads love poetry to the victim while holding her at gun-point. OR, it could be much, much darker than that. I think you did a great job with the prompt!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Hello!
Wow, this one is quite memorable! I am picturing some Taratino scene where the assailant reads love poetry to the victim while holding her at gun-point. OR, it could be much, much darker than that. I think you did a great job with the prompt!
Words can kill ... if you're doing it right. This review is sponsored by "The Little Workshop of Horrors" Club! Find us on the club page if you are interested in joining!"
Patrick
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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I will check out your club soon, Patrick.
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Sounds good, Bill! We're not going anywhere. 😊
Comment from Gunner Lil
I love the picture that used. You got my imagination going all over the place before I read a word.
An easy read that fits in for the contest.
Great job and good luck.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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I love the picture that used. You got my imagination going all over the place before I read a word.
An easy read that fits in for the contest.
Great job and good luck.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, GL
Comment from Debbie Pope
What??? I like your imagination and originality, but I think "delusion" is a better word than "imagination" here. Or insanity. But you know, there are people out there that would still see the love. But they are crazy.
My only real suggestion would be to change the color font to provide better contrast. Better still, keep the red and lighten the gray.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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What??? I like your imagination and originality, but I think "delusion" is a better word than "imagination" here. Or insanity. But you know, there are people out there that would still see the love. But they are crazy.
My only real suggestion would be to change the color font to provide better contrast. Better still, keep the red and lighten the gray.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Delusion it is.
Comment from Begin Again
Goodness! Looking down the barrel of a gun can certainly make the imagination run wild - unless of course, you've fainted into a pile of fear on the floor. Quite the poem .... about love?? LOL
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Goodness! Looking down the barrel of a gun can certainly make the imagination run wild - unless of course, you've fainted into a pile of fear on the floor. Quite the poem .... about love?? LOL
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol