Comment from Me and Erin G

Excellent

I love the "softness" theme running throughout. Sherbet. Soft twilight. Whispers. Very well done. And you could not have chosen a more apropos photo.
Question: was the photo chosen to complement your poem or did the photo inspire your poem?

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024

Wrote the poem then found to photo. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A lovely 5/7/5 poem for the writing prompt. Perfect syllable count. Gorgeous artwork to compliment your work and the satori line was sublime.

Well done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thanks for the read and feedback. Appreciated.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

What a beautiful sight! Aren't we blessed when day comes to end and the sky dons it's colorful dress before wishing us goodnight. Thanks for sharing your poem and the illustration. Awesome!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

You have a lovely poem in the making in your feedback to me. Thanks for the read.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem was perfect for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. You got the syllable counts right, and your descriptions were lovely. I also liked your formatting. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thanks for taking the time to read and respond.