Moving with the Beat
A Brazilian haiku for the pen to paper Club10 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Good advice in your Brazilian haiku, June. Even those of us who aren't good dancers can still allow the beat to take us to another place, face to face. Enjoyed this presentation,
Cheers
Valda
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Good advice in your Brazilian haiku, June. Even those of us who aren't good dancers can still allow the beat to take us to another place, face to face. Enjoyed this presentation,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
Comment from royowen
It's a funny style haiku, I suppose folk like to blend a poetic form into their own way of understanding poetry, but as always you handle it really well, well done dear girl, blessings Roy
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It's a funny style haiku, I suppose folk like to blend a poetic form into their own way of understanding poetry, but as always you handle it really well, well done dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
Comment from shelley kaye
cool brazilian haiku
dancing a c r o s s the page
amidst rising heat---
love the imagery
smooth rhyme and flow with each step
nice work!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
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cool brazilian haiku
dancing a c r o s s the page
amidst rising heat---
love the imagery
smooth rhyme and flow with each step
nice work!!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
Comment from kahpot
These dances are enjoyable to watch, the dancers are so very good and as you say they do give off a great deal of heat, (moves of love-lust) an excellent entry for the club challenge****kahpot
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These dances are enjoyable to watch, the dancers are so very good and as you say they do give off a great deal of heat, (moves of love-lust) an excellent entry for the club challenge****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I often dance around my apartment to the music and it always lifts my mood. I enjoyed your positive words June, dancing uplifts the spirit, love Dolly x x x x
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I often dance around my apartment to the music and it always lifts my mood. I enjoyed your positive words June, dancing uplifts the spirit, love Dolly x x x x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Mark D. R.
June,
Wow, one can just feel the samba with your Brazilian Haiku post for this club entry. Of course, your image portrays a swaying dancer but not one dancing the samba.
My Brazilian-born wife enjoyed your poem too.
She is always after to me to have rhymes in my poems, but your format is above my skill level - congrats on your accomplishment.
Mark
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June,
Wow, one can just feel the samba with your Brazilian Haiku post for this club entry. Of course, your image portrays a swaying dancer but not one dancing the samba.
My Brazilian-born wife enjoyed your poem too.
She is always after to me to have rhymes in my poems, but your format is above my skill level - congrats on your accomplishment.
Mark
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
This is the first I've read about a Brazilian haiku, but I think you nailed it. Your syllable counts and rhymes were perfect. The mental image was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This is the first I've read about a Brazilian haiku, but I think you nailed it. Your syllable counts and rhymes were perfect. The mental image was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully written for the club event and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful new week. Patricia.
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This is beautifully written for the club event and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a wonderful new week. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from jaded831
Listening to music makes me happy and anyone can dance. I am wheelchair bound, so I close my eyes and move to the music, and I am transported to my younger days on the dance floor.
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Listening to music makes me happy and anyone can dance. I am wheelchair bound, so I close my eyes and move to the music, and I am transported to my younger days on the dance floor.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Don't stand in one place...Write your own song and dance to it. It's your life, your plan, and your tune so make it a happy one.
Nicely done.
Smiles, Carol
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Don't stand in one place...Write your own song and dance to it. It's your life, your plan, and your tune so make it a happy one.
Nicely done.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
