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Comment from jessizero
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You did a wonderful job with this "short and colorful" poem. You used the colors to represent feelings perfectly. I also loved the picture. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from kiwisteveh
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Great entry for this contest focusing on two colours that definitely convey meaning, gree (with envy) and blue (sad). You also manage to tell a tale of love lost and some of the negative feelings that go with it, using well-constructed ABCB quatrains.

Good luck in the contest.

Steve

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much. :)