Comment from Esther Brown

Excellent

Good luck in the contest. I find it hard to review poems because they are short and I have to somehow make up enough to fill the required characters. Kisses are kisses no matter the species. Esther

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024

When looking for an illustration to accompany that effort, that picture made me pick it without haste.

And you are so right: a nice kiss can make one's day.

Thank you for the kind review.

Leroy

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I don't think this is the right fit for this contest. You only have three lines, and they don't have the right syllable counts. Other than that, this was a lovely poem. It was sensual without being graphic. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you so much! I think I misunderstood the requirements. I saw it and someone particular came to mind. I am trying to write more. This year I have probably signed up for about 20 contests but submitted work for less than half.

Thanks again.

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

Your poem is wonderful. The idea of kisses being "soft and gentle" and "delicious to taste" is so nice to read. It captures the joy of love beautifully. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024

Thank you so very much.