Springfest
A short poem about Spring8 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Springfest, brings the readers into the early spring with the luring thrill of the daffodils and the green enchantment that is forever present on the sturdy trees.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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This poem, Springfest, brings the readers into the early spring with the luring thrill of the daffodils and the green enchantment that is forever present on the sturdy trees.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill, for sharing my poem.
Comment from zanya
Spring and its many and varied signs is celebrated here, most filled with color after the long dark wintry months have finally ended-vibrant colors here in this poem remind the reader of this wonderful season.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Spring and its many and varied signs is celebrated here, most filled with color after the long dark wintry months have finally ended-vibrant colors here in this poem remind the reader of this wonderful season.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you, zanya. Spring will always be my favorite season for the reason you cited, its colors.
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Have a good week. Patric.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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This is very well written for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may God bless you. Have a good week. Patric.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, patcelaw, for sharing and praising my poem.
Comment from Aiona
What a pretty poem. I like poems that rhyme, and this one has a definite rhyme structure of abaab and very strict iambic pentameter. Plus it makes me smile with its beautiful description (including the required color of the prompt), and personification of nature -- ex. "bob their pretty heads and flounce around."
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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What a pretty poem. I like poems that rhyme, and this one has a definite rhyme structure of abaab and very strict iambic pentameter. Plus it makes me smile with its beautiful description (including the required color of the prompt), and personification of nature -- ex. "bob their pretty heads and flounce around."
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Aiona, for your lovely praise of my short poem. I am pleased it made you smile.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed the energy in your poem! I love how you described daffodils "bobbing" and "flouncing"! The way you bring everything together is perfect. You share such a beautiful picture of spring. So well written.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed the energy in your poem! I love how you described daffodils "bobbing" and "flouncing"! The way you bring everything together is perfect. You share such a beautiful picture of spring. So well written.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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I am so pleased you enjoyed my Spring poem, Michael. Many thanks for your high praise..
Comment from royowen
Flowers are surely a sign that there is an evidence of rulership in this universe that is not only a balance and order in creation, and to my way of thinking is unimpeachable, beautifully written. Good luck, Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Flowers are surely a sign that there is an evidence of rulership in this universe that is not only a balance and order in creation, and to my way of thinking is unimpeachable, beautifully written. Good luck, Blessings Roy
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy, for sharing and praising my poem.
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Well donev
Comment from Begin Again
What a beautifu vision your words have painted. I love when the gorgeous yellow heads of daffodils pop from the ground and dance in the wind announcing spring is here. It's so uplifting.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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What a beautifu vision your words have painted. I love when the gorgeous yellow heads of daffodils pop from the ground and dance in the wind announcing spring is here. It's so uplifting.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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So pleased you like my Spring poem, Carol. Thank you for sharing.
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
This is a wonderful expression with lots of personification:
---daffodils "bob their pretty heads and flounce around."
---"breezes tease"
---"rains revive"
---"evergreens in festive dress astound"
All of these examples bring this poem to life, displaying an energy that most poems lack. Very well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Hello!
This is a wonderful expression with lots of personification:
---daffodils "bob their pretty heads and flounce around."
---"breezes tease"
---"rains revive"
---"evergreens in festive dress astound"
All of these examples bring this poem to life, displaying an energy that most poems lack. Very well done! Good luck in the contest!
Patrick
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Patrick, I truly appreciate your high praise of my Spring poem. Thank you!
