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3 total reviews 
Comment from RJ Heritage
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I think this is a beautiful and refreshing poem that takes us away from the 'skies, lakes and oceans" that are always exploited by us poets. Your verses are minimal, but the expression and illustration are powerful. Well done.
RJ

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    Thank you
reply by RJ Heritage on 15-Sep-2024
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from Begin Again
Excellent
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The eyes definitely show the sadness in the painter's heart and also the pink lips, tease memories of a love once shared. Very well done. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
    Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
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I love how much emotion you packed into your poem! I also liked how you used colors not just in the poem but also in the presentation. I felt the connection to a past love while reading it. It was so enjoyable to read. What a beautiful poem. Great job!

 Comment Written 14-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
    Thank you