2024 Japanese Poetry
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8 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Sunsets feel different at every season. I'm sure the dolphins had fun splashing in the sunset colored water. Great use of the s-sound alliteration in your poem!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
Sunsets feel different at every season. I'm sure the dolphins had fun splashing in the sunset colored water. Great use of the s-sound alliteration in your poem!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister.
MariVal 😘 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm wondering why the waves are moody. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoy the times I've gone to the Gulf and was able to see dolphins. They're so much fun to watch.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
I'm wondering why the waves are moody. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem and presentation with us. I enjoy the times I've gone to the Gulf and was able to see dolphins. They're so much fun to watch.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very, Barbara
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Katiemae1977
Really like this one. "Moody blue waves " is particularly nice. "Cerulean sea" ...also very nice. Liked that you mentioned dolphins.
Well done Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
Really like this one. "Moody blue waves " is particularly nice. "Cerulean sea" ...also very nice. Liked that you mentioned dolphins.
Well done Gypsy.
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs 😊
Comment from Neonewman
You know, I've never thought of waves being moody before. It makes sense. Sometimes, they're calm and gentle; sometimes, they're wild and angry, and everything in between. Beautifully crafted, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
You know, I've never thought of waves being moody before. It makes sense. Sometimes, they're calm and gentle; sometimes, they're wild and angry, and everything in between. Beautifully crafted, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve. God bless you too.
Gypsy 😊
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Always a pleasure.
Comment from shelley kaye
love the "moody blue waves" image!
it creates a cool picture...
a great haiku with smooth flowing words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
love the "moody blue waves" image!
it creates a cool picture...
a great haiku with smooth flowing words...
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Shelley
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Love all the blues here! Cerulean is such a beautiful word infusing your naani verse with atmosphere and a seductive image of sunset over the sea. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Love all the blues here! Cerulean is such a beautiful word infusing your naani verse with atmosphere and a seductive image of sunset over the sea. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and it is beautifully presented, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you a very blessed evening and a very, very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
This is very nicely written and it is beautifully presented, and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you a very blessed evening and a very, very good weekend and may God bless you. Patricia.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from royowen
It's always fascinated me the way the sea and the horizon blend into one when there is a calm day, it looks like eternity as time blends with eternity to make one miracle, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
It's always fascinated me the way the sea and the horizon blend into one when there is a calm day, it looks like eternity as time blends with eternity to make one miracle, well done Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy.
Gypsy 😊
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Most welcome