Butterfly Effect
Turbulence in chaos.2 total reviews
Comment from kiwisteveh
... and if we believe deeply in this theory your butterflies may even send cyclones all the way down here to New Zealand. Of course the butterflies neither know nor care about their capacity for destruction
Good job of squeezing this thought into the haiku format, although I see 'fluttering' caused a syllable-count issue.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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... and if we believe deeply in this theory your butterflies may even send cyclones all the way down here to New Zealand. Of course the butterflies neither know nor care about their capacity for destruction
Good job of squeezing this thought into the haiku format, although I see 'fluttering' caused a syllable-count issue.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thanks, Steve.
Comment from papa55mike
We plant butterfly gardens, and Monarchs are one of the species we haven't seen this year. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the artwork. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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We plant butterfly gardens, and Monarchs are one of the species we haven't seen this year. What a wonderfully written poem, and I love the artwork. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Mike. God bless you, too.
