Penguins Like To Swim
Haiku contest6 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Just to read this one because my daughter who I live with has a name of penguin so penguin kinda stands out in my mind.z I wish the very best in the contest and I also wish you a very nice week. Patricia.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Just to read this one because my daughter who I live with has a name of penguin so penguin kinda stands out in my mind.z I wish the very best in the contest and I also wish you a very nice week. Patricia.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from tempeste
Ciao mystery poet, you now have 3 votes.
A timely topic.
Global warming has caused devastating consequences to the Emperor penguins
In 2022 , the chicks of entire colonies died because the sea ice on which they breed broke up too early and the chicks drowned.
Polar bear instead depend on sea ice to reach their main source of food seals which live in open sea.
The situation is dire and will only get worse.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Ciao mystery poet, you now have 3 votes.
A timely topic.
Global warming has caused devastating consequences to the Emperor penguins
In 2022 , the chicks of entire colonies died because the sea ice on which they breed broke up too early and the chicks drowned.
Polar bear instead depend on sea ice to reach their main source of food seals which live in open sea.
The situation is dire and will only get worse.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem. But spelling error with "drifting". The way you describe ice breaking and drifting did a wonerful job of sharing the the feeling of loss and disconnection. For emt his shared a sense of heartache. I love how much emotion you've packed into just a few lines. Great job!
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem. But spelling error with "drifting". The way you describe ice breaking and drifting did a wonerful job of sharing the the feeling of loss and disconnection. For emt his shared a sense of heartache. I love how much emotion you've packed into just a few lines. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, Penguins Like to Swim, has the proper formatting and delivers a sad awakening that the species which enjoy the frozen North are quickly losing their home.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This haiku, Penguins Like to Swim, has the proper formatting and delivers a sad awakening that the species which enjoy the frozen North are quickly losing their home.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Comment from Shanbreen
I like this Haiku. Reminds me a bit of the penguin who returned home after some 20 odd days-- got out during the hurricane from a sanctuary for these birds. The visual is stunning as the penguin watches pieces of [its] broken home. Best for the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I like this Haiku. Reminds me a bit of the penguin who returned home after some 20 odd days-- got out during the hurricane from a sanctuary for these birds. The visual is stunning as the penguin watches pieces of [its] broken home. Best for the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Comment from papa55mike
I'm always amazed when looking at the ways penguins survive and thrive in the coldest climates on earth. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I'm always amazed when looking at the ways penguins survive and thrive in the coldest climates on earth. What a wonderfully written poem. Good luck in the contest! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you
