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A Student

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Comment from Begin Again
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though the thought of this being true sent chills up and down my spine, it's unfortunately the life we see unfolding for our children. It's pathetic and past the stage of saying it's alarming. Someone - somehow - needs to stop this senselessness.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024

Comment from Bill Schott
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This haiku, A Student, has the proper formatting and brings the stark reality of today's school scene into our consciousness. A mind is a terrible thing to fill with hate and revenge.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024