In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Rise"Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
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Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Jessica,
This heartfelt poem is poignant and very sad.
..."yet silence falls" ...and still upon his knees." are such powerful words.
You describe sadness and loss so well.
Excellent poem in tribute to Nomi and his beloved.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Jessica,
This heartfelt poem is poignant and very sad.
..."yet silence falls" ...and still upon his knees." are such powerful words.
You describe sadness and loss so well.
Excellent poem in tribute to Nomi and his beloved.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Cindy, thank you so much. Truly appreciated! Xo
Comment from Janet Foor
A beautiful tribute to Yvonne and nomi in a sonnet form poem. Such a comfort to know that she is with God and that one day they will be reunited.
Very comforting chapter.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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A beautiful tribute to Yvonne and nomi in a sonnet form poem. Such a comfort to know that she is with God and that one day they will be reunited.
Very comforting chapter.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Janet, thank you so much!
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
Darn I just wrote out a whole review here and I slipped away for a second to find out if it was a niece or nephew that you just had and it disappeared so I have to start over again. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I waited to review until today so I could give you much deserved six. I didn't give them to anybody else but oh well your poem is so gorgeous. It describes so much of what Nomi is going through, I bet he really loved it. Thank you again for doing this and for joining the book. This will be so comforting to nomi and his family. Beautiful poem, honey and thank you again for taking the time to do this when you were so busy with your new niece. And by the way, congratulations again. I hope you enjoy her.
PS I normally don't tell you when I have something new out because you always know that I always have something new all the time, right? But the last one was thank you to my friends for National Thank You Day so everybody has a line in there and you have a special line so that's the only reason why I am telling you about it. Love you please take care. God bless, Debi.
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Darn I just wrote out a whole review here and I slipped away for a second to find out if it was a niece or nephew that you just had and it disappeared so I have to start over again. Anyway, I just wanted you to know that I waited to review until today so I could give you much deserved six. I didn't give them to anybody else but oh well your poem is so gorgeous. It describes so much of what Nomi is going through, I bet he really loved it. Thank you again for doing this and for joining the book. This will be so comforting to nomi and his family. Beautiful poem, honey and thank you again for taking the time to do this when you were so busy with your new niece. And by the way, congratulations again. I hope you enjoy her.
PS I normally don't tell you when I have something new out because you always know that I always have something new all the time, right? But the last one was thank you to my friends for National Thank You Day so everybody has a line in there and you have a special line so that's the only reason why I am telling you about it. Love you please take care. God bless, Debi.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from LJbutterfly
Your well-chosen, beautiful words are uplifting, filled with hope, calm, and inspiration. The loss of a spouse after so many years together, is devastating. Fortunately, there are poets like you, who can express sincere condolences in rhymes that can lift the spirits of the bereaved. Thank you for your thoughtful words for Nomi.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Your well-chosen, beautiful words are uplifting, filled with hope, calm, and inspiration. The loss of a spouse after so many years together, is devastating. Fortunately, there are poets like you, who can express sincere condolences in rhymes that can lift the spirits of the bereaved. Thank you for your thoughtful words for Nomi.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much! That means the world. Xo
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a beautifully written poem, depicting the weight of grief, while honoring the love and faith that sustain him. I love the line "Yet darkness won't prevail, for she's the light.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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What a beautifully written poem, depicting the weight of grief, while honoring the love and faith that sustain him. I love the line "Yet darkness won't prevail, for she's the light.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much, Ginda! Xo
Comment from kiwisteveh
An excellent sonnet in support of our colleague and friend in his time of great sorrow. Thank you for taking the time to compose this elegy for Nomi and his wife. I'm sure he will find the poetic responses from people here a comfort as he grapples with his loss and makes his way through the next weeks and months and years.
Steve
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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An excellent sonnet in support of our colleague and friend in his time of great sorrow. Thank you for taking the time to compose this elegy for Nomi and his wife. I'm sure he will find the poetic responses from people here a comfort as he grapples with his loss and makes his way through the next weeks and months and years.
Steve
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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I appreciate that so much, Steve. Thank you!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jessica,
it breaks my heart he lost his wife...I have
been a friend of Nolan's for many years...
she is now resting in peace...she is now home...
prayers to his family and friends...
this is a beautiful tribute to Nolan Jess...I know he
will be touched by your words...his faith in
God will get him through...and I will always
keep him in my prayers...
I love your beautiful poem sweet girl...and your picture
says it all...amazing...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Hi Jessica,
it breaks my heart he lost his wife...I have
been a friend of Nolan's for many years...
she is now resting in peace...she is now home...
prayers to his family and friends...
this is a beautiful tribute to Nolan Jess...I know he
will be touched by your words...his faith in
God will get him through...and I will always
keep him in my prayers...
I love your beautiful poem sweet girl...and your picture
says it all...amazing...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you Linda! You are the sweetest. Lots of love! Xoxo
Thank You Jess...and you my sweet
friend are sooo welcome...love xxoo
🌼🙏🤗❤️
Comment from Boogienights
We never really lose those we love, they are still with us in spirit...that is my belief. This poem make me cry, that doesn't happen to me often. I just felt so emotional reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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We never really lose those we love, they are still with us in spirit...that is my belief. This poem make me cry, that doesn't happen to me often. I just felt so emotional reading it.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Thank you! Xoxo
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jessica,
A wonderful sonnet for Nomi, with beauty and grace.
All the marvelous elements of a Shakespearean sonnet
combine with an outstanding couplet to send comforting
message to a fellow Fanstorian.
I'm sure Nolan appreciates every word.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Hello Jessica,
A wonderful sonnet for Nomi, with beauty and grace.
All the marvelous elements of a Shakespearean sonnet
combine with an outstanding couplet to send comforting
message to a fellow Fanstorian.
I'm sure Nolan appreciates every word.
Best wishes to all.
Robert
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2024
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Robert, thank you so much! Xo
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jessica,
This is a poignant sonnet about the grief Nolan feels after the death of his wife. The love will always be there and at times he will hear her voice.
All these poems will help him to travel through his grief knowing he is not alone.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
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Hi Jessica,
This is a poignant sonnet about the grief Nolan feels after the death of his wife. The love will always be there and at times he will hear her voice.
All these poems will help him to travel through his grief knowing he is not alone.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024