Nature's Heartbeat
a rhythmn in time4 total reviews
Comment from Patrick Bernardy
Hello!
Congratulations on winning my contest! You did an unbelievable job with the prompt.
My favorite phrases:
---"amber canvas of autumn"
---"a gentle sigh whispering secrets of the trees."
---"is rich with the earthy scent of pine"
You are certainly a sensual writer. I salute your skill, my friend!
Patrick
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Hello!
Congratulations on winning my contest! You did an unbelievable job with the prompt.
My favorite phrases:
---"amber canvas of autumn"
---"a gentle sigh whispering secrets of the trees."
---"is rich with the earthy scent of pine"
You are certainly a sensual writer. I salute your skill, my friend!
Patrick
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Patrick,
Thank you for your congrats on the win. Your contest was a joy to enter and offered a challenge to craft a 100-word story the met the contest requirements.
All the best,
Eugene
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Patrick,
Thank you for your congrats on the win. Your contest was a joy to enter and offered a challenge to craft a 100-word story the met the contest requirements.
All the best,
Eugene
Comment from F. William Lester
Nicely done. You used all five senses and painted a scene that the reader could physically immerse themselves in. Well written and thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest. Be well.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Nicely done. You used all five senses and painted a scene that the reader could physically immerse themselves in. Well written and thanks for sharing it. Good luck in the contest. Be well.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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F. William Lester,
Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.
All the best,
Eugene
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You're welcome.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem shares such a wonderful scene! I love how you bring the forest to life with little details like the sound of leaves crunching and the touch of bark. The imagery of the red dress was wonderful. Your words create a wonderful atmosphere. I felt like I was part of the experience of a magical moment. It's wonderful! Beautifully written!
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Your poem shares such a wonderful scene! I love how you bring the forest to life with little details like the sound of leaves crunching and the touch of bark. The imagery of the red dress was wonderful. Your words create a wonderful atmosphere. I felt like I was part of the experience of a magical moment. It's wonderful! Beautifully written!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
Comment from lancellot
This is nice. I think it could be better if we it was, She, the subject experiencing the senses and not the narrator. Perhaps a first person POV would fit best. But this is a good entry.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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This is nice. I think it could be better if we it was, She, the subject experiencing the senses and not the narrator. Perhaps a first person POV would fit best. But this is a good entry.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Lancellot,
Thank you for your review. I appreciate and value your wonderful comments.
All the best,
Eugene
