Broken Trust
Be wary of what you loan2 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Great rhymes and flow in this post and we can all identify with the sentiments here. Being betrayed is a feeling we can never forget. A fine post for the contest and a winner for me, love Dolly x
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Great rhymes and flow in this post and we can all identify with the sentiments here. Being betrayed is a feeling we can never forget. A fine post for the contest and a winner for me, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
Comment from patcelaw
The feeling of betrayal comes very strongly across in this wonderful poem that rhymes very nicely and is smoothly read when it is read allowed. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best for the contest. Patricia.
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The feeling of betrayal comes very strongly across in this wonderful poem that rhymes very nicely and is smoothly read when it is read allowed. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I wish you the best for the contest. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024