Wonders of my mind
A younger version of myself trying to figure things out2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is very powerful. I appreciate the honesty in your writing. It makes your poem feel very "human". I love how raw your poem feel. Keep letting your imagination guide your writing!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This is very powerful. I appreciate the honesty in your writing. It makes your poem feel very "human". I love how raw your poem feel. Keep letting your imagination guide your writing!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you
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Thank you
Comment from Janet Foor
A very thought provoking poem DeVon. I have noted some suggestions for your consideration.
I try (to) regenerate my mind by
I feel like the things that are bad in my life was (were) my fault
You make (may) think that I'm alright
You have a nice way of expressing your feelings and I wish you the very best.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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A very thought provoking poem DeVon. I have noted some suggestions for your consideration.
I try (to) regenerate my mind by
I feel like the things that are bad in my life was (were) my fault
You make (may) think that I'm alright
You have a nice way of expressing your feelings and I wish you the very best.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you for your feedback. I appreciate it