In Memory of Nomi's Wife, Yvonne
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Rain "Posts to let Nomi know we are here for him
7 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Cindy.
-You wrote a very good poem for Nolan.
-I know he will appreciate it.
-I like your three opening lines,
especially, "Tears of God's gladness rolled down her face."
-You do a good job with what God said to Yvonne.
-A very good closing verse.
-Thanks for sharing this and caring.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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-Lovely artwork and nice presentation, Cindy.
-You wrote a very good poem for Nolan.
-I know he will appreciate it.
-I like your three opening lines,
especially, "Tears of God's gladness rolled down her face."
-You do a good job with what God said to Yvonne.
-A very good closing verse.
-Thanks for sharing this and caring.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Pam for your detailed review! I appreciate you!
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You are very welcome, Cindy.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautiful and heartfelt poem to comfort and encourage Nolan. The compassion is evident and the comfort and care will be a source of peace for him as he travels this difficult road. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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A beautiful and heartfelt poem to comfort and encourage Nolan. The compassion is evident and the comfort and care will be a source of peace for him as he travels this difficult road. Thank you for sharing.
Wendy
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Wendy.
Comment from karenina
Oh how I wish I had unlimited six-stars this week. All of these "gifts of poetry" for Nomi have brought a tear to my eye and a smile to my face, for I believe as you do--
Yvonne is with Jesus and they will surely be reunited. "Rain" was a perfect metaphor/theme for this poem.
I'm sure their family has been raining tears...but the "SON-shine is also right there to ease their pain!
Very nice, Cindy!
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Oh how I wish I had unlimited six-stars this week. All of these "gifts of poetry" for Nomi have brought a tear to my eye and a smile to my face, for I believe as you do--
Yvonne is with Jesus and they will surely be reunited. "Rain" was a perfect metaphor/theme for this poem.
I'm sure their family has been raining tears...but the "SON-shine is also right there to ease their pain!
Very nice, Cindy!
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Karenina!
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Most welcome, Cindy!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this comforting poem for Nomi with us. I know our prayer of comfort have God surrounding him and his family. The artwork you chose is beautiful.
I have a question - Nolan will join us at My chosen pace." Place sort of works here because it will be in God's timing, but place also works here. Just wanting to make sure.)
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this comforting poem for Nomi with us. I know our prayer of comfort have God surrounding him and his family. The artwork you chose is beautiful.
I have a question - Nolan will join us at My chosen pace." Place sort of works here because it will be in God's timing, but place also works here. Just wanting to make sure.)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from jim vecchio
There are some wonderful examples of the true heart of FanStory writers like yourself merging talents to commemorate the loss of a truly loved one. Thank you for posting.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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There are some wonderful examples of the true heart of FanStory writers like yourself merging talents to commemorate the loss of a truly loved one. Thank you for posting.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Jim!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This poem beautifully shares a wonderful moment. The imagery of God's embrace was beautiful. The way you showed Nolan's grief is excellent. The line "Tears of God's gladness" really stood out to me. You've written a moving poem that speaks to loss. I also like how you show the comfort found in faith. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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This poem beautifully shares a wonderful moment. The imagery of God's embrace was beautiful. The way you showed Nolan's grief is excellent. The line "Tears of God's gladness" really stood out to me. You've written a moving poem that speaks to loss. I also like how you show the comfort found in faith. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Michael.
Comment from Begin Again
Good morning, Cindy! You've written a beautiful poem for Nomi and Yvonne, but it has several gremlins within the lines. Just a quick fix and all will be good.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Good morning, Cindy! You've written a beautiful poem for Nomi and Yvonne, but it has several gremlins within the lines. Just a quick fix and all will be good.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Carol!