Comment from
papa55mike
The Milky Way does look like a river flowing in the night sky leading us home. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing! Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Thanks Mike. It is a song that is much better when sung. God Bless you as well.
Comment from
Michael Ludwinder
Wow, this is such a beautifully poem! I love how it flows so effortlessly. The lines about the river running wild really add to the sense of movement and power. I also like the spiritual undertones. Absolutely wonderfully written. So enjoyable.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
Thanks, but not a poem, a song, as shown in the title.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
I'm glad you liked it. If I could sing it here, you would like it even more.