Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

I think you summarized it well. She knew all the targets of that egotistical maniac who blames immigrants and everyone else for what he won't take responsibility for. It's shocking that the Republican Party who claims to be conservative would choose such an amoral, incompetent, thin-skinned megalomaniac to represent them!
Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024

thanks it was fun to write the debate not so much

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Author,
I really like your 5-7-5 entry. Harris had him for supper, I think.
Hoping for better times ahead,and hopefully living in a blue state,
Cindy
Best wishes across the miles.
Cindy

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Frank Malley

Good

I have to agree with this poem's assessment of the 9/10/24 Presidential Debate. It's amazing that this author chose not to make fun of Candidate Trump, who continually gaffes his way through reality like a hamster trying karaoke. In this 5-7-4 poem, I do think that more pizzazz about the two debaters could've been invented despite its brevity.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

We all will see the debate with different thoughts and takeaways, but in mind, in this particular debate, she walked away taking the claim to fame. Nice haiku.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

thanks a lot

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I think you are one syllable short on that last line. I could be wrong, but you might want to double-check it. Other than that, I enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024

thanks a lot I will check it out