Twenty-Two
Youthful Romance3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Yes, I certainly think she was getting her share of romance! A great age to play the field. Your free rhyming verse has a lovely lighthearted tone and captures the essence of youth perfectly. Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
Yes, I certainly think she was getting her share of romance! A great age to play the field. Your free rhyming verse has a lovely lighthearted tone and captures the essence of youth perfectly. Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Thank you so much Debbie for the kind review. I really appreciate that!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I'm not sure it was romance she was getting. Maybe they were falling for lust. I believe they're different, but I'm a romance purist, if there is such a thing. LOL I had fun reading your poem.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
I'm not sure it was romance she was getting. Maybe they were falling for lust. I believe they're different, but I'm a romance purist, if there is such a thing. LOL I had fun reading your poem.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Barbara. I think she might have gotten both.
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Why not????
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Lol! Exactly...
Comment from Begin Again
With what we know today and how many psychos are lurking around every corner, I think the young ladies need to think twice about getting their share.... if they want to wake up to see another day. Oh! Did I just toss a wet blanket on your poem? Sorry!!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
With what we know today and how many psychos are lurking around every corner, I think the young ladies need to think twice about getting their share.... if they want to wake up to see another day. Oh! Did I just toss a wet blanket on your poem? Sorry!!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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LOL! Yes you did Carol. And the sad thing is - you are so right!
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I did wring most of the water out before I tossed it, so maybe others will see it differently. Have a great day, Harry!
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LOL! Well, thank you! You too.