Underwater Adventure
5-7-5 poem5 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Hello and Good Morning. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day. I love the colorful artwork you chose to set this off. It rally looks so vibrant and sparkly, just like the jewel reference you used. Well done and a great entry for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Hello and Good Morning. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day. I love the colorful artwork you chose to set this off. It rally looks so vibrant and sparkly, just like the jewel reference you used. Well done and a great entry for this prompt. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 12-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2024
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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love the presentation you set up with the artwork and the colors chosen for background and text. The poem has lovely descriptive imagery.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love the presentation you set up with the artwork and the colors chosen for background and text. The poem has lovely descriptive imagery.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I really enjoyed your poem! I like the little mystery with "jewels and danger" - in just a few words you say a lot. For me I imagine the wonders and risks hidden beneath the surface. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I really enjoyed your poem! I like the little mystery with "jewels and danger" - in just a few words you say a lot. For me I imagine the wonders and risks hidden beneath the surface. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Comment from jessizero
I enjoyed this 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right, and I liked your mental image. This poem has a cool and serene feel to it, despite the potential danger. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I enjoyed this 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right, and I liked your mental image. This poem has a cool and serene feel to it, despite the potential danger. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Comment from Begin Again
I always wanted to explore ocean reefs and see what beauty they had to offer, but the closest I came to it was the 125-gallon saltwater aquarium in my family room. Watching coral, fish, and life beneath the sea was mesmerizing.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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I always wanted to explore ocean reefs and see what beauty they had to offer, but the closest I came to it was the 125-gallon saltwater aquarium in my family room. Watching coral, fish, and life beneath the sea was mesmerizing.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
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Thank you