Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello and Good Morning. I hope you are enjoying a lovely day. I love the colorful artwork you chose to set this off. It rally looks so vibrant and sparkly, just like the jewel reference you used. Well done and a great entry for this prompt. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2024

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Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. I love the presentation you set up with the artwork and the colors chosen for background and text. The poem has lovely descriptive imagery.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I really enjoyed your poem! I like the little mystery with "jewels and danger" - in just a few words you say a lot. For me I imagine the wonders and risks hidden beneath the surface. Beautifully done!

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I enjoyed this 5-7-5 for the writing prompt. It looks like you got the syllable counts right, and I liked your mental image. This poem has a cool and serene feel to it, despite the potential danger. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

I always wanted to explore ocean reefs and see what beauty they had to offer, but the closest I came to it was the 125-gallon saltwater aquarium in my family room. Watching coral, fish, and life beneath the sea was mesmerizing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024

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