Comment from
jessizero
This was a very effective "reverse" poem. I couldn't write one of these to save my life, so I know it takes talent to pull this off, which you did. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
Comment from
Begin Again
I can't even write a simple rhyming poem and you've given us a poem that one can read up and down and get a different version of anticipation. Wonderful! WEll done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
Thank you:) I'm sure you can write wonderfully! Even with jam fingers
reply by Begin Again on 11-Sep-2024
Actually peanut butter would be better! Because then I could lick my fingers while I wallowed in my desperation. LOL