Darkness Fell
He gave His life...3 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
This was a nicely done 2-4-6-8 poem that followed the required 2-4-6-8 syllable count for the writing prompt. I like that it had some rhyme as well -- "cross" and "loss." The topic was interesting as well.
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This was a nicely done 2-4-6-8 poem that followed the required 2-4-6-8 syllable count for the writing prompt. I like that it had some rhyme as well -- "cross" and "loss." The topic was interesting as well.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
I loved this poem for the writing prompt. You got the syllable counts right, and I think you painted a great picture with your words. This is a wonderful telling of one of the greatest events in history. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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I loved this poem for the writing prompt. You got the syllable counts right, and I think you painted a great picture with your words. This is a wonderful telling of one of the greatest events in history. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Your marvelous poem paints a glorious picture of the moment Christ died and we were saved, but most of it all, it reminds us that Satan can never win. Beautiful art work!
Smiles, Carol
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Your marvelous poem paints a glorious picture of the moment Christ died and we were saved, but most of it all, it reminds us that Satan can never win. Beautiful art work!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
