Loss
An abandonment and betrayal2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem shares the raw intensity of betrayal so well. I could feel the depth of pain it leaves behind. I appreciate how you use strong language to share the emotional turmoil and sense of being torn apart. Very powerful and well written!
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Your poem shares the raw intensity of betrayal so well. I could feel the depth of pain it leaves behind. I appreciate how you use strong language to share the emotional turmoil and sense of being torn apart. Very powerful and well written!
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024
Comment from jessizero
On line six, "you torn" should probably be "you tore"
I appreciate that you numbered the lines in this poem. The poem itself was heart-wrenching, and a good piece for the "betrayal" poetry contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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On line six, "you torn" should probably be "you tore"
I appreciate that you numbered the lines in this poem. The poem itself was heart-wrenching, and a good piece for the "betrayal" poetry contest. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 11-Sep-2024