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2024 Gypsy's Haiku

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Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

A Lune-like Haiku IMHO!

Do like the overall imagery of your verse and accompanying illustrations. The implied coloring adds to the effect you created.

Mark

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Mark. May you have a wonderful weekend

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Winter moons are beautiful over freshly fallen snow. I would hate to say goodbye to it. Your poem and presentation are both beautiful as we've come to expect from you. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and showing us the way, it should be done.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Barbara

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from shelley kaye
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beneath the grey sky
we will say goodbye
to the summer's blue
and hello to autumn
and its coloured hue. . .


cool winter haiku!
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    I love your version.... sounds good.

    Thank you very much, Shelley 😊

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
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Very dreamy and nostalgic poem of when we leave or let go of things or people we once had in our lives. Your color scheme is always stunning. Thank you for sharing this one with me.
RJ

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, RJ

    Gypsy 😊
reply by RJ Heritage on 11-Sep-2024
    My pleasure
    RJ
Comment from patcelaw
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This is very well worded it is so so beautifully presented I enjoyed very much reading it and I wish for you a very good week and may you have a blessed day. Patricia

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, Patricia

    Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
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I wonder if we should say goodbye or hello to the moon. Soon it will be the Autumn moon and a great time of festivities in many parts of the world. But if we say goodbye to the "winter" moon, then spring should be coming.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 11-Sep-2024
    Thank you very much, big sister ❤️

    Marival 😊